Brother Game: Chapter 34: The End
I know this Heath has been quite AU from both the television series and much of the fan fiction. I have often wondered though about a boy raised by three kind, gentle women who loved him very much. I...
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I have truly enjoyed reading every chapter of this wonderful story, and this very different version of Heath.....I hope that you soon get the inspiration you're waiting for to let us know how this AU...
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"I'd like to stay. Be your brother," and for the first time Nick saw the boy smile. Truly smile, a wide happy smile that lit up his face. "Big brother, huh?"Yes, I love that! Bravo Nick, you did...
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I really enjoyed working with you on this! Hope to see more
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Fabulous story!! I hope you get inspired for a sequel. Your story telling is heart felt and detailed. You capture the characters so well.
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I hope your Muse visits soon. I'm anxious to see how the good people of Stockton take to the newest Barkley - and how he takes to them.
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"I don't know about brothers, real brothers," Yet another example of your pithy phrases and sentences that clutch at my heart. And what a lovely end to this phase of the Brother Game. If (and when!)...
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I love what Valley Girl said, and I agree. I have no doubt your [poor!] muse is simply taking a brief breather and you'll be hard at it again soon. Can't wait! Great story!
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This story has been a pleasure to read from the very first word to the last and I will be looking out for your next story. There is so much for the brother to learn about one another, now that both...
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Sniff...sniff!!! I'm literally teary! Partly because the story is over, and partly because it has been such a moving and beautiful read! The way you wrote Victoria realizing that she thought of Heath...
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You did such a wonderful job with this story, Pippa! It kept me riveted from the first chapter with the way you brought in Heath's insight into each situation. Thank you for this first posting and I...
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Loved this story so much! I'm so glad that Heath has decided to give his family a chance. I'm sure Nick will be able to teach Heath what being brother is all about. I hope you will have inspiration...
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Thank you for the wonderful tale. I have enjoyed every chapter posted and I'll miss Healths point of view on the World of Barkley. Really appreciate the time and effort you put in to post a chapter...
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This has been so enjoyable from that powerful beginning to this emotional end. I know it's not always easy finding story number two after story number one. Take your time and it will come to you....
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I'm having major comp probs so I hope this holds out long enough to right! this was a wonderful story and how I have always seen Heath really looking forward to a sequel or just another great story,...
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Enjoyed this story very much and just loved the ending - the talk between Nick and Heath!
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Please accept my apologies for not writing sooner to congratulate you on the splendid end to your story. It was a beautifully crafted and engrossing look at our beloved characters, and you nailed it...
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